Terror and desesperation...spelling.

[silo]

I don't know if it was reported already but while I was shaking the passengers yesterday after making them drunk, I saw on the inflight
report the word "desesperation" which should be desperation instead.

[Jetsgo]

I've noticed a few spelling mistakes aswell

[SE-TMA]

I do not know if spelling is a big issue, but there are some spelling errors. Those I can find are:

"Terror and desesperation" -> "Terror and Desperation"
"...somes..." -> "...some..."

[DBE]

Details..

But knowing Dan, I'm sure he would appreciate you posting them here for the next release.

And re: "Desesperation", if Hollywood is allowed to bring out a movie called "Desperado" (instead of "Desesperado"), why shouldn't FSP be granted the
same creative liberties?

[DanSteph]

Updated... will be ok in next version.

Thanks & keep posting,

Dan

[djdavies]

Not only are there many spelling errors, but errors in syntax that are driving me crazy. I hereby volunteer my time in pointing them out, public or
private, if I think they will be addressed.

[pagir]

Please, report them! (Here, or by PM to Dan)

Pagir

[djdavies]

You're on.

Can we make this post a sticky, or would that be too much?

[DanSteph]

just write into it I'll keep an eyes here...

Dan



Post Edited ( 08-10-05 12:09 )

[silo]

I don't know if it falls in this category but here's another one...

"Hostess Advice:
While we started at 13pm just after dinner time we estimate that the passengers ate just before the flight and will be hungry in about 2
hours."

I took off at 1 pm and it's supposed to be "after lunch time" not dinner.



Post Edited ( 08-11-05 02:30 )

[silo]

I installed the new version of FsP and here's what I've spotted:

1) at the end screen where you have to click on exit after a successful installation it says "Notice: FsPassengers may have overwrited
your config file". It should say "overwritten".

2) "you'll just need to setup the differents option again" ----> different options.

But somebody more expert maybe could step in and rewrite that sentence.

In the first screen, when it's asking if you want to make a backup, I saw somewhere in that sentence the use of "as"...sounds much better
if you use "like" instead.

I can spot some grammar errors but I don't think my english is good enough to correct sentences. But I'd like to try anyway if you don't
mind (just don't kill me... )

"Note: FsPassengers may have overwritten you config file. You may re-configure FsP by visiting its menu. If you have purchased FsP and you are upgrading, you will need to enter your registration code again to unlock it."



Post Edited ( 08-11-05 04:27 )

[silo]

...and Dan, thank you for the update!!!!

[redhmt]

silo wrote:

I took off at 1 pm and it's supposed to be "after lunch time" not dinner.

Hey Silo,it depends where you come from .Here in england we have Breakfast....Dinner....Tea.....& Supper, unless you are posh and
then you may have Lunch

Happy Flying

Phil

[nem]

silo wrote:
2) "you'll just need to setup the differents option again" ----&gt different options.

And "to set up" instead of "to setup", while we're at it. You set up a setup, not setup a set up.

I think this was all a setup to begin with... (thanks for the "bad pun" flowers, please don't stop! )

[DanSteph]

I'll take this post as reference to make corrections but please make SURE that your correction
are 100% accurate...

Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks

Dan